Disclaimer* All Things I write are subject to artistic creation.
I’ve never gutted anyone nor has anyone gutted me.
I don’t feel all that much on this, as you gut me of intestines.
Sprawled out on your couch I could use a real inspiration.Are you one of those new waves?
You know the type that don’t crash at all;
They just keep on going towards nothings
Fizzle out afraid to hit the shore!It’s a tragedy; The only people diving in are jokers.
All the intelligent fools are jaded
They didn’t like how the feelings made them hurt
So they brush them off and learn to love the cold.
There’s a fire in here and they hover by the stove.I’ve always been so foolish,
Rash decisions to a dead head
Say baby, damn it’s cold outside!
Let that freeze chill into the bark on the trees,
You’re skin can take hits like that, but there’s no need,
The only hits you should feel are drugs like me,
So come over inside for some boot knocking,
I’m not talking shoe shopping,
Down for coming, but not out of pocket;
Watch it, always time for them good vibes
Like clockwork I know how your cogs work,
Do it slow to the sunrise, covered in sunlight,
I’ll make waves in your harbor and rock them ships,
40 days and nights when it’s done
Only I’ll have to apologize on account of Cupid’s aim – He only grazed me
Spend enough time on something and you’ll love or hate.
Certainly kept my attention, and certainly each line unexpected! I’d call it pretty good poetry – if you can take a hit like that 🙂 Enjoyed this a lot…
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I am glad you could enjoy it as you say John. I will continue my best to deliver to such a level!
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I really liked this! It flowed but kept surprising. The exclamation point at the end of the second stanza threw me off and I loved it!
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I’m glad it took you for a ride! That was my intention after all.
Cheers,
IV
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oh my god, beautiful.
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this is really great writing. really elegantly crafted. I love reading stuff like this 🙂
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My deep gratitudes to you for taking the time to enjoy them
-IV
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I really like this and it strangely applies to what I’m going through right now. As you sort of said, spend enough time together and you either love or hate. I hope after my son and daughter-in-law move out we feel love and not the other.
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I do wish you able to find that love after they move out and not the other! I’m glad you liked it and thank you for taking the time view!
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Reblogged this on Nuclear Polio Vaccination and commented:
Real Spit.
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Appreciate it mate!
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I appreciate the “like” on my latest post. Respect due your way.
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Aboslutely, I was glad to take the time and enjoy what you shared 🙂
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Great work on this one 🙂
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I really appreciate the feedback! I hope you return to enjoy future posts!
-IV
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This is an amazing piece. I like your style and technique! 🙂
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I appreciate that 🙂 I put myself into all of it
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” There is a fire in here and they hover by the stove…” wonderful!
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😉 I really liked that one once I put it down too ha
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Verses with twists makes the best poetry.
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Thank you, I like to twist things 🙂
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Thank you for liking my post! I thought I’d have a little read of yours and a little read turnt into several others lool, i love this, i love the way you write! It’s amazing i wish i would write like this
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Write as you do, and love what you do. You will evolve overtime. I do appreciate your words, and I enjoyed reading your post! I hope to read more as time goes forward.
-IV
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I really appreciate so much of what you are writing (I just chose to comment on this one) Just the aesthetic, and the deliverance really conveys a passion and almost a yearning that speaks to me. Really neat stuff! 🙂
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I do appreciate your kind words, and am glad you can derive enjoyment from them just as me. My hopes in writing them is to speak to myself, but the fact that it goes beyond that and speaks to others is an entirely next level feeling 🙂
Thank you for taking your time to read,
-IV
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