No One Loves Your Poems


Doesn’t that strike you like someone who knows all your trigger points? We read em’ sure. We read every last word start to end again, and again. Alright I’m not telling it straight.

The truth is no loves your poems the same way that they love
the way your poems get them feeling.
Yes, they love the way you write it out of them,
how it drags them under the current,
and holds their consciousness for ransom!

How could they love your poems as much; When that feeling they get comes shooting from their viscerals roaring like a migration of butterflies, and birds, and bees bursting from the back of their throat – They’ve just got to fly

There is no time to stop and love your poems the way they must go out and catch every last winged creature that spewed forth into the wide opened mouth of the sky

No one loves your poems like that; But does it matter if it made their blood pump a little quicker the next few times around the circuit?
Does it matter if it leaves the hairs on their arms standing tall, while the scent of it all lingers in their soul like the smell of a long night on the bed sheets?

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7 thoughts on “No One Loves Your Poems

  1. “The truth is no loves your poems the same way that they love
    the way your poems get them feeling.” – True, and that feeling, it should be very addictive.

    “No one loves your poems like that; But does it matter if it made their blood pump a little quicker the next few times around the circuit?
    Does it matter if it leaves the hairs on their arms standing tall, while the the scent of it all lingers in their soul like the smell of a long night on the bed sheets?” – I like this a lot.

    – sonmi nodding with emphasis upon the Cloud

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  2. Reblogged this on Sonmi's Cloud and commented:
    I really like the core of this, for it is the best of feelings to be dragged under the current, one’s consciousness held for ransom in such a powerful way when reading prose, be it poetic or fictional.

    Like

  3. Talia Hardy says:

    Are you the Artist of these delightful sketches?

    Liked by 1 person

  4. itsvishakha says:

    Did you sketch that!? Nice that is, and I always love what you write cause you can make a person feel every word and line you write!!

    Thank you friend

    Liked by 1 person

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